Welcome to Your Mystery Story Page! This is the sweet spot to post your best effort at writing a mystery! This is also the place to post two stars and a wish about the other stories you read. Two stars are positive things you see in the story and your wish is constructive feedback on how to specifically improve the story.
So, to recap....which means go over again, post your story here after you've done some in class editing with your peers and then post it online for the world to see. The other people who are part of your team online, will post 2 stars (positive things) and one wish (constructive feedback to help make the story better). Be kind, because after all, they will do the same for you!
Bear.C17
The Lost 4 Friends
One hot sunny day on bear island 4 friends, Bob, Joe, Bear and Charlie. Got lost when they went for a hike in the mountains. They were hiking then it started to get dark. They started to head back to there truck but they didn't know were they parked.
So they made a hut out of twigs, rope that they packed, leaves for the roof, wood, and some stuff they found on the ground. They made a fire and sat beside it until they got tired. So they went to sleep. as they were waking up they notised that Bear wasn't there. When they were about to go see where he was suddenly a Black bear showed up and was sniffing around the place. so they just stayed in their little hut that they made. The bear started to sniff inside there little hut. The bear seen the 3 friends. The 3 friends were stuned. They didn't know wut to do. Suddenly Bear showed up with some fire wood. when Bear seen the bear so Bear threw his axe at the bear but it never killed the bear but it just made it even more mad but it wasn't mad so it made it mad. Bear didn't know what to do so Bear hoped that the bear wouldn't kill him. So Bear ran off in the woods and hid. The black bear wondered in the woods looking for Bear, but Bear was hideing to good for the black bear. so when the coast was clear Bear ran off to Joe, Bob, and Charlie. When he got back Charlie asked, "where were u in all that time we were wondering?" Bear siad, "i went to go get some fire wood." Charlie asked," then where is the fire wood?" " Well i droped it when i threw the axe at the black bear smart one." So Bear went to go get the fire wood and bring it back while Joe and Bob went to go find some food and some water. they came back with nothing. Bear and Charlie got the fire going. so they put the fire out after an hour, because they got pretty thristy. so they all went to find some water or some food. they came back with nothing. so they survied the day with out anything. the next morning they all got up and went to go find some water. they were looking for hours an hours. then they found a little river on the side of the mountain. they all filled up the contairs of water. they started to head back to the camp site. when they got there they started the fire. it started to get late so they all went to bed. Bear said, "the day went by so fast." he next morning they all got up. it was cold out. so charlie started the fire. about 1:30 a helicopter flew by. when the helicopter seen the 4 freinds it came back to pick them up. The guy said, " wut were u guys doing?" Bob said, " we went hiking, but when we went to head back to our trucks we got lost." so the helicopter guy flew them back home. when they got home their wifes asked, " where were u?" they all said," its a long story."
that was so good
The bomb
by
slappy
On the night of Halloween there was a guy named Slappy. He had two friends there names are Jack and Mack. The next day they went to school. When they got there everybody was outside. There was a green mist coming from inside the school. It smelled so horrible that it could knock out a pig and put it to sleep. Once the mist cleared away the stink bomb was hidden in a locker . The teacher set out to find who did this. Slappy and Mack did not now why anybody would want to put a stink bomb in Mack's locker. Mack looked around then he said, Where is Jack. He told me he had to get some thing and that he would met us at lunch time.
Can you figure out the mystery
But he did not meet us at lunch time.
Instead he met us at the principles office. He had got caught putting the stink bomb in Mack's locker.
Mystery Story
by Bob
One day I was walking in Delia and I see Luke running out of his store after someone. I ran up to and asked him whats going on. He said someone stole all the cash,fifteen chocolate bars and all the gum. Luke found out it was a kid with a toy gun. I found MR.waddles panting
Do you know who did it
it was misTER WATOLS HI BOB I loved your story it was rily great
Welcome to Your Mystery Story Page! This is the sweet spot to post your best effort at writing a mystery! This is also the place to post two stars and a wish about the other stories you read. Two stars are positive things you see in the story and your wish is constructive feedback on how to specifically improve the story.
So, to recap....which means go over again, post your story here after you've done some in class editing with your peers and then post it online for the world to see. The other people who are part of your team online, will post 2 stars (positive things) and one wish (constructive feedback to help make the story better). Be kind, because after all, they will do the same for you!
The Lost 4 Friends
One hot sunny day on bear island 4 friends, Bob, Joe, Bear and Charlie. Got lost when they went for a hike in the mountains. They were hiking then it started to get dark. They started to head back to there truck but they didn't know were they parked.
So they made a hut out of twigs, rope that they packed, leaves for the roof, wood, and some stuff they found on the ground. They made a fire and sat beside it until they got tired. So they went to sleep. as they were waking up they notised that Bear wasn't there. When they were about to go see where he was suddenly a Black bear showed up and was sniffing around the place. so they just stayed in their little hut that they made. The bear started to sniff inside there little hut. The bear seen the 3 friends. The 3 friends were stuned. They didn't know wut to do. Suddenly Bear showed up with some fire wood. when Bear seen the bear so Bear threw his axe at the bear but it never killed the bear but it just made it even more mad but it wasn't mad so it made it mad. Bear didn't know what to do so Bear hoped that the bear wouldn't kill him. So Bear ran off in the woods and hid. The black bear wondered in the woods looking for Bear, but Bear was hideing to good for the black bear. so when the coast was clear Bear ran off to Joe, Bob, and Charlie. When he got back Charlie asked, "where were u in all that time we were wondering?" Bear siad, "i went to go get some fire wood." Charlie asked," then where is the fire wood?" " Well i droped it when i threw the axe at the black bear smart one." So Bear went to go get the fire wood and bring it back while Joe and Bob went to go find some food and some water. they came back with nothing. Bear and Charlie got the fire going. so they put the fire out after an hour, because they got pretty thristy. so they all went to find some water or some food. they came back with nothing. so they survied the day with out anything. the next morning they all got up and went to go find some water. they were looking for hours an hours. then they found a little river on the side of the mountain. they all filled up the contairs of water. they started to head back to the camp site. when they got there they started the fire. it started to get late so they all went to bed. Bear said, "the day went by so fast." he next morning they all got up. it was cold out. so charlie started the fire. about 1:30 a helicopter flew by. when the helicopter seen the 4 freinds it came back to pick them up. The guy said, " wut were u guys doing?" Bob said, " we went hiking, but when we went to head back to our trucks we got lost." so the helicopter guy flew them back home. when they got home their wifes asked, " where were u?" they all said," its a long story."
that was so good
The bomb
by
slappy
On the night of Halloween there was a guy named Slappy. He had two friends there names are Jack and Mack. The next day they went to school. When they got there everybody was outside. There was a green mist coming from inside the school. It smelled so horrible that it could knock out a pig and put it to sleep. Once the mist cleared away the stink bomb was hidden in a locker . The teacher set out to find who did this. Slappy and Mack did not now why anybody would want to put a stink bomb in Mack's locker. Mack looked around then he said, Where is Jack. He told me he had to get some thing and that he would met us at lunch time.
Can you figure out the mystery
But he did not meet us at lunch time.
Instead he met us at the principles office. He had got caught putting the stink bomb in Mack's locker.
by Bob
One day I was walking in Delia and I see Luke running out of his store after someone. I ran up to and asked him whats going on. He said someone stole all the cash,fifteen chocolate bars and all the gum. Luke found out it was a kid with a toy gun. I found MR.waddles panting
Do you know who did it
it was misTER WATOLS
HI BOB I loved your story it was rily great